I love the concept and communication on the whistle 5 logo, but it could use some better execution. Part of the problem is that your main focus is on a typographic element and it is not very carefully drawn. It would look better as a solid 5. The outside curve of the 5 looks good but the inside one is really rough. The plus sign/cross should be more regular and balanced with all four parts equal. the large black shape on the left should have parallel sides. There needs to be better relationships and alignment with the slash on top and the left side shape and the 5. It would be worth cleaning this one up a bit.
Looking good. I would still thicken the lines on the antennae and the teeth/brows.
ReplyDeleteI love the concept and communication on the whistle 5 logo, but it could use some better execution. Part of the problem is that your main focus is on a typographic element and it is not very carefully drawn. It would look better as a solid 5. The outside curve of the 5 looks good but the inside one is really rough. The plus sign/cross should be more regular and balanced with all four parts equal. the large black shape on the left should have parallel sides. There needs to be better relationships and alignment with the slash on top and the left side shape and the 5. It would be worth cleaning this one up a bit.
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